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You unlock the best of me

the 'me' you so pine

when we believe in the best of one another

 

Only then

can the sum of our parts 

exceed the standards of exceptional hearts

and I become enough for you

 

Until then

fault me all you want for not 

tearing down your own walls in heated pursuit

 

until we see a shared truth

and until the wild hair along your face 

resembles the deepest roots

I'm going to defend 

like the rock that I am

I won't move

 

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saiom's picture

beautiful

 

profound poem about

love's metamorphosis

in making 2 into 1



 

 

deepblue's picture

You're too kind :) thank you 

You're too kind :) thank you 

saiom's picture

wonderful

''

'Only then

can the sum of our parts 

exceed the standards of exceptional hearts

and I become enough for you'


how many hundreds of millions have 1 partner feeling insecure.. is

the thought your line sparked in me



 

 

deepblue's picture

Apologies for the delayed

Apologies for the delayed reply but I appreciate you stopping by and giving this a read :) yea, I was (rightfully) getting some distant vibes from a girl that I liked and there are few things that knock you off your game than feeling insecure in front of somebody you like, heh. 

 

In hindsight, it was justified cuz she has since started a new relationship the past month or so. It's clear she didn't feel the same, but that's ok. I didn't allow myself to get too swallowed up in the hope of something working out and it made the truth more palatable. Eh.

allets's picture

Deep Blue

In rare form. Tell her what you need. Communication clear. Good write. ~S~


 

 

deepblue's picture

Thank you, lady :) 

Thank you, lady :) 

lyrycsyntyme's picture

"until the wild hair in your

"until the wild hair in your face / resembles the deepest roots"

 

Beginning in the fields of botany and horticulture, I love the clever, beautiful way you expressed metaphoric connection between the human existance and that of the tree, including the parellels between the seen and unseen.