Would you notice? 11-21-05

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Poems

Would you notice me

The kid standing against the wall

Standing blasting his headphones

So loud you hear them down the hall



Would you notice me

The kid standing by the wall

Not making a sound at all

Just staring down the hall



Would you talk to me

Or even give a passing glance

The seconds come and pass

Time never seems to last



Would you even care

If you knew the pain I was in

The world is ending and for me now

No one knows how I feel



Will you ever know

How much your missing out on

Not knowing people like me or me

This life we'll never figure out

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Rarely anyone noticed me. The kid standing on the wall. No one cared but to insult me, no one understood at all.

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pking partner's picture

i understand where ur comeing from and i say fuck being noticed if thay dont see u thay wont be hurt by u ...oor vice vrsa but hay fuck em right?

cara's picture

be a happy nickey mouse
do it now :)
and ont do the dew
it kills the little soliders
in your "undercarriage"
<3 cara

doyle51209's picture

vary true