I feel the warmth begin to fade
The world becomes a darker shade
I no longer know this face
I feel my heart begin to race
The lack of blood makes me faint
The floor around begun to taint
With my blood a slow red wave
How long till my mind will cave
I draw a final gasp of air
And wonder if you even care
This is it, now I die
With my last breath I say goodbye.
i have a poem in more or less relantance to yours called goodbye, old friend...maybe you should read it
I love this poem it is amazing your such a talented writer never stop writing because you could go to the moon and back with nothing but putting a pen to paper