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A few words
Thoughts colliding, memories left wanting, crawling, crumbling, hoping, wishing, crying now.
Shattered, loving, believing, remembering, feeling now.
Missing, slipping, empty, shining, silly-hearted, seeing, crying more.
Painful, breaking, tearing, falling, feeling more.
Learning, working, dying, living without you.
Flying, singing, dancing, spinning, breathing, alive inside with you.
This sounds like words blowing in the wind after a very tramatic experiance! Or feelings of a moment in time very specific and very memoriable to you. This is truely what poetry is all about. Keep up the good work!
Nice, this style of writing is well done
Your words are winding and they flood over me...I'm left in this trance-like state, somehow...this piece overfloods with loveliness.