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Pain
The tears runs
down her face
like a river.
"Why does it
hurt so much?"
She has never
felt this way
before.
So much pain
filled her heart.
She made a
promise to her
self not to
let anyone in
because she knew
that once she
lets someone in
that they would
hurt her.
She likes him
more than she
ever thought she
would.
He opend up
her heart and
brought light into
it but when
he broke up
with her the
light faded quick
like the sun
going into battle
with the moon
and lossing.
Very
heart-felt. Love and loss there of can inspire some great poetry. Liking your use of metaphonr in the last few lines. Well done. What more do you have in store for us?