As I open my eyes and as I look around,
I realize I do not belong.
Suddenly dark thoughts abound,
and taunt the demons that make me forlorn.
Blood rushes everywhere,
spurting in little streams.
And when I close my eyes I become scared,
Forced to watch frailty dreams.
Why is it so important to you all,
that I should stay in the mortal realm?
When all I want is to be in control,
to captian my own helm.
But sadly for me the world keeps spinning,
twisting me out of the norm.
And still sadder for me the depression keeps winning,
until I am reborn.
Definately not bad, I think most can relate to this feeling.
This poem has a really good flow, all stanza's are well written.
Great
nikki
Nicole.J.Burgesss