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Volume Three
What has become of this life?
A victim of hate and brutality.
The insanity of it all is they believe their right.
In that being slaves, somehow they are free.
Violence is all we've ever known,
played out on TV, death is all we have been shown.
Running on legal speed, praised for your greed.
Insanity at the helm. It's the age of decay as he guide's your realm.
Forgotten is the beauty in kindness, morality within it's greatness.
All children of knowledge, children of faith
we all posses the potential to be great.
“Do you want to change the world, or allow the world to change you?”
I will conquer the world with love,
Shower you with kindness, and affection.
Give you my full undivided attention
In a world drowning in lies,
at least have the courage to look me in the eyes.
“You had your chance,
down on my knees no where to go
escaped your seductive glance
just as you had the killing blow.”
I'm in the same boat...
When your writers block is gone come back to this please! I love this and with a little revision it will be perfect!
EricaMay
Thank you, It means a lot
Thank you, It means a lot that people love my art so much. To answer your question, honestly I am not sure what I would revise to this, though you sparked a curiosity in me in what you'd revise in it if you had any ideas? you have my permission to continue/edit this piece and post it up on your wall I'd love to see what you would add/change in it :)
well, well, this should be
well, well, this should be fun!
EricaMay
Wow with works so good I wish
Wow with works so good I wish I had your kind of writers block often! I've said it before I'll say it again droplets of brilliance in every verse ;) cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you, and well sometimes
Thank you, and well sometimes I am able to squeeze work out when I suffer from writters block but it always makes me feel like it turned out less than good.
Anyone who doesn't know you
Anyone who doesn't know you very well, ie. me, wouldn't have been able to know that you are having a writer's block =)
<3
Thank you, you all are way
Thank you, you all are way too kind!
Lol. No prob!
Lol. No prob!
<3
I loved this. Really good. I
I loved this. Really good. I agree with what you said. Keep going hon!
-Elfy*
as always love to read your
as always love to read your comments, again thank you for the kind words!