"I saw you cry, through the gazer's eye
With this pen, will be a rememberance of them.
Running scared through the field, innocents that was killed.
ripping through this life, while avoiding any kind of strife
living just to get by. living just to survive so now you know why I get high.
Blazing to the stars, finding peace to all the wars.
To my brothers and sisters I do implore, to find common ground within our core.
The only thing that seperates you and I is this illusion behind our eye"
Good write and the last line
Good write and the last line is thought provoking, beautiful and artfully done!
Im beganing to see i think,
Im beganing to see i think, why you do. And i like how your mind tells your storys, they really twist in the readers head, you have to think, as the reader says it, to try to undestand it. lol its cool.
-Elfy*
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I like this, it is very deep at its core.. I especially love your last line,
"The only thing that seperates you and I is this illusion behind our eye"
Thank you for sharing.
Please keep them coming :)
Thank you! :) and yes I too
Thank you! :) and yes I too find that last line to stand out the best.