Time is dancing around the clock
as the rejected and missing begin to knock
it's the hum of nothing that makes the sound
of the days they lost and never found
It's a knock on the door when no one's home
and the footprints of those who were never known
It's the distant words that were never heard
and the laughter of life that now seems absurd
It's the cold morning air that reaches noone
and days of work that will never be done
It's the fallen tears of an afternoon
That never regained it's place with the midnight dew
To those who were never born , we remember
the innocence lost in a moral surrender
and now we say goodbye to the never existing
but we will all remember , time never stops dancing
~ Dakota
(Poem is not complete yet)
Very good poem. Nice pacing, good use of rhyme. Is it about something in particular? or is it just me? And maybe the third stanza, if you would call it that, could possibly use some work. But I see that it isn't complete yet, but it is very good nonetheless.
I'm a psycho, not a doctor.