She stood there in the middle
of the forest,
the sun's rays
glistened through the trees.
She was waiting for her knight
in shining armour,
to come along and
sweep her off her feet.
She and her knight
have been in love,
as long as she could remember.
Their love for eachother
was as pure as the raindrops,
that fall from the sky.
Whenever she saw her knight,
he would have always have
a dozen, long stem
rich red roses.
He would get down
off his black stallion and
lay them at her feet.
She would look into his eyes
and smile at him,
he would gaze into hers
and smile back,
they would then begin to kiss.
They knew deep down inside
how true their love was,
he would then get back
up onto his stallion and
ride off into the sunset.
Her heart longed for him
to come riding up on
his black stallion and
kiss her once more,
he came galloping across the forest,
he looked troubled.
He got down off the stallion
and lay the dozen, long stem
rich red roses at her feet.
He collapsed once the roses were placed,
he had a sword
sticking out of his back.
She knelt down by his side,
as his life slowly drained
away from him.
"Forget-me-not,
fair maiden,
I shall love thee forever."
"I shall never forget thee,
my knight in shining armour
I shall love thee always."
She stood up and
cried tears of sadness
for her knight,
while the roses,
lay at her feet.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Mar.7/2004
AWESOME POEM
Thankyou very much for the gracious complements in your last critique and allow me to extend some of my own. I liked this poem very much. Also I have come to greatly enjoy your poetry as a whole, you have an amazing way with words that allows me to easily imagine exactly what you are writing about, especialy in this one. Good hereing from you and I look forward to writing you again soon.
Exquisite!
Starward