Our Love?

I think of you and how we used to be

Wrapped together in the sheer poetry

Of a deep love we once shared

Back when I was sure that you cared

I think of the good times that exceeded the bad

The happy days that exceeded the sad

And I laugh to think how naive we were and are

Thinking that if we had love, our love, would go far

We were mistaken love was not our destiny

We were meerly in lust and acted so childishly

Acting as if we cared for each other so deeply

Broke up the relationship and now we see

That where we went wrong we could never change

We were our selves no matter how deranged

Though love was shared we were not meant to be

Just wish it hadn't ended so bluntly

Author's Notes/Comments: 

About the first guy i loved...

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Jordan Rasnic's picture

I wished that things could've worked out. Maybe sometime later... in the near future, I hope...

Heather Butler's picture

hey chica, this was a really good poem i liked alot, ithink it is beautiful... I wish you well in years to come, call me sumtime much love
Heather
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Josh Tucker's picture

this poem reminds me of someone i liked at one point, it almost makes me wish i loved someone, but oh well, a really killer poem

-josh