Do you see me???

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Do you see me???



Do you see the way I hurt?

The way I deal with pain?



Do you see my heart?

The way I love in vain?



Do you see my eyes?

The way my souls aches?



Do you see me as a person?

The way my spirit breaks?



Do you see me???

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Written August 5th 2003...Thoughts of whether people know the real me...

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Crying Child's picture

Hi!! Remember me? ^^" Long time ago, I wrote Dark Angel! I like this poem..loving in vein..sounds like me!Keep writing!

Rachel  Marie Tate's picture

It's always hard to tell if people know the real you, huh... shyyyt, it's still hard for me to know if I know the real me or not :-) But thru all the writing, that helps - keep doin you hon, writin it out'll pay off when you're able to look back on what you've done :-)