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Death In Winter
A winter death seems natural
Everything else dies and so did you
There was no cheerful color
Of flowers or leaves
To bless the earth with color
To give false cheer
To the gloomy day you left me
There was no sun
To brighten the sky
No birds to sing
Nothing but gloom
As the world mourns
Good day
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Excellently written, Amy.The desolation and sadness can be felt.
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Very sweet poem.
Good job!
Keep writing!
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I think that this is a wonderful poem. I really felt every word. Thank you for sharing it.
Amy
This is an excellent poem. So sad... a lament about the loss of a dear one - something I can relate to very well. My dear friend died in the summer, but the world also mourned... Very well-written!
Kind regards
Nicolette
Cool Poem, I like it.