Flowers in her hair glistening through the summer breeze
Fragile girl, but she’ll never say please, make you beg on your knees
Forsakes her pain for laughter, love in her eyes she’ll never go after
Sheltered by daylight, too soon the chariot shifts the air into desolate night
Take chances untold, to seek and to hold, never let them tell you to fold
A faltering faith yet she'll dance till the sun, singing but always longing to run
Some people cry and others die, and we're standing idly as the world passes us by
Such fools filled with remorse, darling take my hand without a course
Over and over I lie and I listen, Live off a dream, don’t know what I’m missing
Many dreams come true, every moment they try to bring me back to you anew
No desert storm or raging tempest will make me realize, oh how they hypnotize
There you are, and there you were, in and out of love without a stir
Nonetheless my fantasy lingers on, not so far are we before the dawn

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Vamprose999's picture

I adore this, beautifully

I adore this, beautifully written and opens the soul. Well done.

nightlight1220's picture

Very beautiful poem. A person

Very beautiful poem. A person with true insight who sees with eyes of true love for a friend.


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


bishu's picture

Carefree Style

I love the carefree style in your lines and words. Fresh and invigorating. I can almost smell the dewy misty wildflower fragrance thru the words. Of course I am no poet... just a scribbler. Thanks for asking me to be your ppoem friend.



allets's picture


To be selected as one of the first top ten is really saying something about your work, wordsmith - be well ~allets