if i show u my soul,
what will u see,
if i wasnt numb,
what would i feel,
if i had a heart,
could i love again,
if i wasnt so far gone,
could u cure my tragedy,
if i was alive,
would u lie to me,
if u new me,
would u fear me,
if u know me,
why dont u understand me,
if u loved me,
why did u lie to me,
if i give u the knife,
will u end my pain,
if u looked into my eyes,
would u get lost in the darkness,
if i give u a candle,
will u light the way,
if i sit under the moon,
will u sit by my side,
when i needed u the most,
y weren't u there with me,
when i looked into ur eyes,
could i see r future,
when i lost myself,
y did i give u up,
when i faded away,
did my heart die that day,
when i close my eyes,
y is it u i always see,
if u hate me,
why wont the memories fade,
when i faded away,
y did ur memories stay,
if i die today,
will u cry for me?
Nice work, it really makes me think - if that makes any sense. =) Excelent poem.
i love the -if- idea. it changes perspective.