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4 Little Words
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Love Poetry Each mile that separates us
Is a hole in my heart.
The love I feel for him
Is so completely real
It's almost like a dream
That I dont ever want to wake up from.
With every word he speaks
My heart falls farther.
He smiles at me and whispers
I love you too.
And all the sadness in my life disappears,
There is only him
Standing in front of me
Speaking to my soul.
I think it very clever that the poem is about those '4 little words' rather than the original three, it creates a whole different situation and completely different emotions. Well done
Terri T
wow, so it means you said i love you first! how sweet .. ^_^ and i like this one, it's so heartfelt, and i could relate to it so much. ^_^