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I feel your love

Is like a coat

Just wrap it around me

While, in air, I float

 

I know some have said

They wanted to throw it off

But me, oh no I just

Want keep it on and scoff

 

At the peoples who don’t

Want that coat or its warmth

Because I do, I love it

Because it is so warm

 

So I keep it on

As I plan to keep you

Because we are so in love

It’s so perfect and it’s true

 

~Chrystal

Written on

March 27, 2011

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this one for Bri. I read Coat by Vickie Feaver and thats where this one came from. I only took the title, the poem itself was about how she felt he was like a coat and wanted to shrug it off, and doing so she realized that he was her warmth. I didn't want this one to be like that so I did say he was my warmth but I didn't even want to shrug it off  the same way she did. 

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16 March 2012 - 6:18am — MrsLivingston©
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Awesome poem :) I especially

Awesome poem :) I especially love the part:

"At the peoples who don’t
Want that coat or its warmth
Because I do, I love it
Because it is so warm
So I keep it on
As I plan to keep you
Because we are so in love
It’s so perfect and it’s true"

~BUG~

16 March 2012 - 6:37am — crimsonangel24
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I'm Glad

that you found this one and like it. I did end up leaving him but ohhh well, I ended up finding another, one to which I will never, ever leave. So I suppose he is my new coat. :)

Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before. - Steven Wright

People like you are the reason people like me exsist. Out of a song of the same title by a band called 'Say Anything'