i've held back my anger
and never replied to strangers
when they said mean stuff
like call me a cheese puff
when they pulled my hair
i would just stare
i alwayz got pushed around
only god knows how much i've fell to the ground
but i've changed now
and everybody's like wow
when u come near me
u better b
aware, it danger
cause im gonna release me anger
on ur face
it dont matter about ur race
i no longer hide
my feelings inside
there's no longer n e tears
or n e thing left to fear
so watch ur back
cause i'll tear down ur shack
and u better believe thats a fact!
wow this poem is nice.. i can hear your thoughts in this one.. i like da messege.. tough but smooth.. i like it.. thanks for the critque on my poem.. i apprieciate it