It was midnight bantering and sly of heart
My brain, so lost had just began to start
To comprehend for what was inside of me
Had brought me to, these conclusions three
First was, my severe lack of trust
Second was, my unsatiable lust
And although these both were prominent
My third had proved to be most dominant
It was never obvious, but ruled inside
Made sense for why I had never tried
For my third, came a startling conclusion
That most of my life, has been an illusion
Fake memories of what never was
Showing what a cynical mind does
Replacing the good with only the bad
Fueling my anger, to get myself mad
I fear my own brain, because it's corrupted
Losing control when thoughts are interrupted
It wants me to see, the worst side of things
So that I can't enjoy the happiness it brings
It's a trojan horse, waiting inside of me
Soldiers composed of stress and irascibility
You listened to me, but not what you thought
With open arms, it was confidence you brought
For a heart so pure, I knew what I had to do
I stopped the madness from getting through
I composed myself, and thought of your word
From your lips, it was inspiring to be heard
With gentle good-byes, we part our ways
But in my mind, your word still stays
Although so simple, it's a wonderful word to give
For the word that still sticks with me, is live
damn good bud....your as unique as a winters dream ...you make the clear...unclear and the obtuse more precise
jeff,
i really like your poem. it is very nice, well written and rhythmic indeed.
i wish you all the best.
Dr. Zayed Bin Zakir Shawon
jeff:
you make me think whenever i read something that you write, just as i do the same to you. it's the beginning of august, i hardly have time to think about school, and i'm considering changing my major to english, with a minor in creative writing.
opinion?