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My Poetic Beggining To call upon God's and let it reign, through this will you speak His great Holy name. And in that name there is but peace; joy & power, the absence of grief. And with that power there's always hope, for good to prevail through evils revoke. Life & death in the tongue will be, for what you speak you shall surely see. And with that sight you will not need, the worlds understanding of the powers that be. The way of the world is of death & pain, always through which you will remain. Through pride & guilt will all but fall, with the exception of those who don't live at all. To give your lives and save your souls, this truly is the most righteous of roles. And through those roles we all will see, the greatness & glory of God to be. So let always your understanding come from the Lord, allow evil & wickedness to prevail no more. As the end of days draws closer & near, let us discover why we're all really here..
This is very good. Not that
This is very good.
Not that I'm a pro but I was told poems and such read better in poetry form rather than paragraph.
To call upon God's and let it reign,
through this will you speak His great Holy name.
guess it makes it look more like a poem, kind of sad because one should read the words and not look at the form.
Keep writing, keep trying and let His words flow from your mind, to the paper
Susan Bressman
If there's one thing that's
If there's one thing that's easy to be poetic and passionate about its Gods love for His children. In time and with practice I'm sure we'll both become better. Thanks for the feedback and God bless.