A Thing Called Fantasy

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There comes a day when you and I
Will travel together these lands
With faith while holding hands
From rustic ruins am Rhein
To Alpine-scapes on high.

 

If, by some happenstance
Here I should not return,
How heavy my heart will burn,
But foresake not, I forewarn,
Lest we risk our rightly chance . . .

 

To daydream and to beget
Tall tales of two together,
Played in nestled pleasure,
Replete with woolly wood
Of most Dionysian measure.

 

Truly, I await such a site
Despite a presence of harm,
But I'll give you all my charm
Under a sky of moonlit form
For guiding my star-struck sight.

 

With words "forever ours!"
Not one shall say otherwise,
Not a king nor men wise
Could lien love so high;
Not even Mercury on Mars.

 

Alas, I'll awake from this fantasy

Alone and saddened for I'll feel

That our amour was never real.

Merely made blind by boyish zeal,

Dantesque dreams, and flattery.
 

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battlepink's picture

I AB-SO-LUTE-LY loved

I AB-SO-LUTE-LY loved this............I just got back from a 9 day trip to Scotland with the man I love......this was just how I felt. I could almost see this as wedding vows....could I be wrong?

CoreyRyan1's picture

Thank You

Thank you for the kind words. I would love to one day visit Scotland! Relating to your question, unfortunately this work doesn't
appeal to any kind of weddding vows. It's rather a fantastical form of love that is unrequited in nature. Hence the title, A Thing Called Tapestry, which alludes to the love object's (the unrequited lover) reality as something fantastical or exaggerated, something one might expect to see in a tapestry showcasing a Provencal poet or Minnesinger. Peace.

allets's picture

Unrequited

The love in the poem was pretty lofty to eclips mer and mars, nature abounded as object of portrait/tapestry, the benefit of a lib arts education...I should write an unrequited ove poem to nature in Ebonics (smile) - so not gonna happen - allets


 

 

CoreyRyan1's picture

This isn't one of my favorite

This isn't one of my favorite pieces; I think it's still lacking in substance. I'd like to improve on it, to expound more on the ending, for it's too abrupt in my opinion.
Thanks for the commentary once more. I've been reading your work too the past days. I always appreciate a fellow student of the Geisteswissenschaften (humanities) and liberal arts!!