THE CROSS
The scene was ugly and gruesome
this man on the cross was God’s son.
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No crime he committed
no sin omitted.
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There he hung for all to see
stripped and naked on a tree.
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It was a bloody sight
the man from Galilee nailed on tight.
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39 lashes he had taken
He was beaten,brusied and forsaken.
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His closest friends had left him to sob
He was now in the hands of an angry mob!
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His beard was torn from his cheek!
his outlook so bleak!
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A crown of thorns was rammed on his head!
to look at him, he almost looked dead!
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They spat in his face!
It was a bloody disgrace!
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He carried his cross in so much pain
by this act of love, the world would gain!
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They nailed him on his cross, on top of a hill
only vinegar was given him, not a pain killing pill.
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His blood run from his head, hands and feet
for this hour he was born ~ to surrender his body ~ to bring defeat!
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They mocked him with a sign over his head
The “King of the Jews”..... would soon be dead!
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They looked upon him with derision
he came to bring division.
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They cast lots for his garment
soldiers gambling over an argument.
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Many women were at the cross weeping and crying
for the one they loved was being hung ~ crucified and dying.
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One criminal mocked him and asked for a sign?
the other asked him for forgiveness just in time!
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God’s will was being done
Jesus hung there all undone!
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Hour after hour it was tougher to breath
many could see him and were grieved.
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Darkness descended like a black cloak
all seemed lost and broke.
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Jesus called out, in a loud voice!
“Father, into your hands I commit my Spirit.”
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The Roman centurion came to break the legs of the crucified
he could see Jesus had died, a spear was thrust into side!
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The scene looked grim
He took it on the chin!
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Not one bone was broken in his body
Scripture fulfilled for everybody.
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The Son of Man had given his life
a ransom for many, granting eternal life!
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In three days, he would rise from the dead!
His precious blood he had shed!
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Never forget what price was paid
Love was seen and displayed.
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He gave up his life freely
because he loves *you* dearly.
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For he lives forever to pardon *you* from your guilt and sin
now you can grin... if you’ve received him within?
Author
Columbo Star
Another great poem!
You have painted a very clear picture of what our Lord and Saviour went through. I felt the last two lines were rather weak. Here's a suggestion: :-)
He lives forever to pardon *you* from guilt and sin
You can grin and win, if you receive Him within!
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Thank you missmfa for your
Thank you missmfa for your time and comments on my poetry. Your suggested ending is good as well ty. Some are called to teach and preach, but not all; the five fold ministry in Ephesians. But ALL believers are to be a witnesses to the Gospel of Jesus Christ...the Good news!
I wish you well in your poetry writing.