There’s a promise in the ocean
of passion, tears and joy
I’ve been taken by its beauty
away from all the world’s noise
In heat or cold I’ll be there
a silhouette on gloaming sky,
I’ll be touched by its blue promise
a real Love Story, I can’t deny.
I’ll wander endless sands to discover,
the secrets of this briney place,
I’ll take it home, forever with me
and in sweet dreams not leave a trace.
Only my footsteps left behind me,
could you follow for awhile,
There’s a promise in the ocean
in my dreams that leaves a smile!
yes..... their is love or
yes..... their is love or something that lurks within when watching over the sea. I'm not sure what it is, but their definitely is a connection standing next to her:)
Lovely poem.
We awaken everyday to hope filled with haze
the attraction to ocean
is that we are more peaceful around a huge mass of water since it draws out negativity by its affect from ionization. we are two thirds water, it's universal attraction too....after falls, powerful water places.
thanks for the read, it meant a lot to me today,especially.
im in a huge battle of health trying to maintain here.
im amazed my lil brains rote this for a ten word challenge at Pendrifts.com where I mainlypost.
check it out!
i post here n there.
some from hers also there n here too.
thanks,friend for a visit and comment!
koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
A promise in the ocean
Wonderland's Pool of Tears, perhaps, spawned from generations of emotions intertwined into a single existence of feeling, and in dreams, realized?
"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr
spawned
outta surfing waves in HawaiI.....oceanic water- child.
thanks for the read,ROC!
nice to have a visit from you.
made my day.
been in hospital trying to stay alive.
wrote it and was amazed I still could.
hugs,
Koko
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words