(trying to set them free)

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time becomes something

that just passes between

myself and the world around,

outside of my thinking

and slipping further from my reach,

the notion that connects me

to the infinite of possibilty,

coming to terms, understanding

these chances worth taking

are really my needs,

to make a lasting impression

on the surrounding canvas of life

that is everybody,

to which

my conscious thoughts speak,

through the person they see,

or were it, the mystery of intrigue, underneath

though my heart reveals nothing,

just the brief expression

of the voiceless and neglected

cast of a person, i long to be, and

not even the sympathy

of feeling sorry

can complete, the lingering empty void

of surgery, performed upon my feelings,

when i unearth the decay

of the things, that i've buried.

(trying to set them free)


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CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

Surgeons must be very careful
When they take the knife!
Underneath their fine incisions
Stirs the Culprit,--Life!
-Emily Dickinson

your poem made me think of this one- life can be a downer. terrible when we would rather not feel at all than to feel what we are feeling..... nice to find out there might be hope yet!
your biggest fan-
christie

CHRISTIE FELTY's picture

believe it or not this is the first time i have read this one. your talent and ability to paint a picture on my heart is quite amazing. metaphorical genius you are. wishing you luck on setting them free!
and ever
~me