My Dream Wish(I guess this could be I song I think ??)

When I close my eyes 

I see you standing there

with your arms open wide.

You're waiting for me on the

other side.


When I close my eyes 

I see us all together 

once again as my brothers,

because my wish is to 

see you again.


Befor I die 

I want to hold you again

I'm wishing for you.


When I close my eyes

I see my brothers 

with their arms open wide.

waiting for me and my sister 

to come to them.



Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is for my 2 brothers that I have not seen in 7 years and wish to see them again sometimes I wake up from nightnamres about them fading away and I never saw them again

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aznhuangazn's picture

Very meaningful. I hope that

Very meaningful. I hope that you will one day reunite with your siblings as I had to go through the same type of life event when I was in Afghanistan. Great choice of words and I truly hope your nightmares end.

nightlight1220's picture

Wonderful poem to your

Wonderful poem to your brothers. How sweet and precious. 

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


willow's picture

Beautiful :)  

Beautiful :)


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