The pain of the past

When I loved you

You have never seen my pain

You have never seen through my mask

Get out,dissapear,begone from my sight

And never appear

You are not the best,

you are like the rest

Why did I fall in love with you?

When my love for you has extinguished

It created a void in my soul

Filled with sorrow,pain and anger

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a.griffiths57's picture

    It is not a good

 

 

It is not a good relationship that speaks of such sorrow and pain in the relationship or after it has ended; I hope you better luck with future relationships. Your poem is to the point and very straight forward, I enjoyed your poem a good read and well written.


 

 

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