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a shoulder, always there,

a smile, never faltered,

my reality too is altered.

i can give you advice, if you give me some too.

guess not, so what?

i guess i'm only here for you.

that's a lie,

you've never seen any of the tears that were shed,

just the people i helped,

my heart feels like led,

i'm tired of this,

my life needs some grip,

i can't take this dirt,

i don't want to see the lies that stain my shirt.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

this about the shoulder that you always to come to cary on, always needs someone to cry too. the advice giver, she needs advice too. and no matter how many smiles you see, everybody is in a battle.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 5:43am
©6 October 2010 - 12:46pm — Crisscrossed
10 December 2010 - 3:51pm — Crisscrossed
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thank you all for defending

thank you all for defending my wiriting :) that means a lot to me <3

and thank you for you feedback :)

2 December 2010 - 4:13pm — drewdeepblue22
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I really dig this poem.  Nice

I really dig this poem.  Nice to actually see a poem that has a nice smooth rhyming pattern to it.  So much of what you read on this site is just rambling pieces of random thoughts.  You did a nice job with this.

A.