HRAVEN AND HELL

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ABSTRACT POEMS
  I hope I will be ok,
  on Judgement Day.
  When God rings the bell,
  hope I don't to Hell.
  Hope my bad, the good will outweigh.
  Yes, hope it will be ok.
  
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lyrycsyntyme's picture

Nice rhyming scheme.

There's similarities in this little poem between the rhyming scheme and how a chord arrangement might lead to the hook in a song. I find it pretty interesting.