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The Death of Me
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DESPAIR Tonight will be
The death of me
Then you'll finally see
And you'll be sorry
I wait for someone
To come and save me
Ha! That'll never happen.
Tonight will be
The death of me
And then you'll see
And be oh-so-sorry.
Come save me
Before it's too late
And I drift off alone
Tonight shall be
The death of me
Then you'll all be
Sorry.
wow really good write....i've often felt that way too...so you're not alone.
hey this is a great piece, keep up the good work.
good work...my style....i like it alot
i had these thoughts when I was younger. But then I realized I'd be the one who would be sorry. And now I know finally why I think so negatively. I have borderline personality disorder it's why I hurt myself and everyone around me.
Life Happens!
Yeah, I've been down that road before. Life is so full of stuff to do, goals to accomplish, and to look forward to that its often a waste sitting around feeling sorry for yourself or your circumstance, or dealing with people who don't give a f*ck about you. Take that negative energy and turn it into something else. Turn it toward yourself and make the decision to be joyous no matter what. Happiness comes and goes, but no one should be able to steal your joy.
it's sad...no matter our ages change...that we're old or young...why we all thinkin the death of us...is there someone to save us...guess not 'couse it's always the same...btw I like it...but I see "me" is already dead...and sounds noone was feeling sorry...sadness...
and on the other hand it could be more impressive by using some...errr...words with deep meanings...like "the death of very me" or " ha! - Alas! " or some old english "cometh" "wilt" "ne'er"
so that's my opinion...
i really like the darkness of this poem, it's right up my alley, but please please don't kill yourself, because you need to write more poems because your talented!
awesome work
on this
amazing
sad piece
i loved it