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A Boy I Once Knew
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LOVED & LOST A boy I once knew
So fair and so kind
He loved me
At least, I thought he did.
We talked
We laughed
I fell for him one day
I'm not quite sure which
Then he told me
One name I never want to hear
Ever again
For as long as I live
She is probably prettier than me
More delicate than me
Fairer skin than me
Laughs cuter than me
Loves him more than me
Holly.
Hi
Wow! Excellent poem, you have there. I loved it. I loved the way it flow, it was great. I can relate. It is hard to lose a love to somebody else. Males go through the same thing as well. Finally, I can relate about the personal nature of the piece. I think that was courageous of you to post them poem, so we can get a sense of who you are-a strong, brave person.
Thanks for sharing it and keep writing.