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I'm Sorry
If I could turn back time
And realize how selfish I was when it came to you
I wouldn't be sitting here
Crying until no tomorrow
Because you're gone
When I sit in my room all alone
Thinking about everything we went through
I can't help but sit here and cry
Like a thunderstorms rain
Because if I wasn't so selfish, would I have lost you?
But as much as I am sorry
I will stop crying someday
I hope you DO realize
Even though I will NEVER say this to your face
Babe, I'm sorry for everything
Oh wow... I did stuff like that, to this guy that I used to like. We never got together though, but I bet he hurt me more than I hurt him. Serves me right though, for telling him to fuck off.
i would talk more about during the relationship and how you guys were together and then have to "When i sit in my room alone" because readers find it more interesting when they have a flashback and they understand what is was like in your relationship.
and y can't u ever tell him? sry if that is too personal but i hope u won't regret your desicion.
"Even though I will NEVER say this to your face"
Well, haven't you just said it to his face, right there? Only joking. I like the anticlimactic quality to this one. I truly wasn't expecting the last line. Well done.
OMG I effin' LOVE this poem my cuzzy it rules! Who knew you were poet! Great job on everything!! I'm proud of the poem you posted up because it's really great! You seriously expressed the way you feel/felt and stuff. Love ya hun, Ltz.