Ambient Mood
Softly aglow in the heavenly parlor,
set amid countless stars gathered by night
Outside the window - a moon of amber shine,
capturer of souls with its enchanting light
With a glimmer from mist in transfixed eyes,
hypnotic lure prompts inspired thoughts to muse
Far off on a world where hopes find their home,
fulfilled life and heart are the ones you choose
Swept up by the whispers of overhead skies,
dormant voices in self - from here to there
Images erasing shadows - fashioned by strife,
tears into smiles from the breath of despair
Peering past the room to further than beyond,
foreign dreams to slumber waken to opened mind
Pleasures that await - familiar for this while,
replace toils tossed away, leaving them behind
Beside your bed, curtains whisked by a breeze,
ambiance - with songs from a Whip-poor-will
Summer eve sounds help instill the pensive mood,
from comfort of pillow - destiny to fulfill
Softly aglow in the heavenly parlor,
set amid countless stars gathered by night
Outside the window - a moon of amber shine,
capturer of souls with its enchanting light
© C.E.Vance
I love your inventive use of
I love your inventive use of language. Fantastic. :)
Thank you very much.
Thank you very much.
Superb !!!!!!!!! my friend Mr Vance
Superb !!!!!!!!! my friend Mr Vance.(The picture was truly compatible with the verse)
©bishu
I'm always so very thankful
I'm always so very thankful for your favorable comments, Bishu.
Mr Vance my friend ,you ARE one of my favourites !!!
Mr Vance my friend ,you ARE one of my favourites !!!
©bishu
Always Melodic
Soft and warming, your verses ease and comfort the incessant mind and brings calm and a glance into something eloquent - muted cadence, hearable like music - Just Bein' Allets
Thank you, Allets…Hopefully
Thank you, Allets…Hopefully most readers see themselves within this moment of reflection and dreams that I tried to create. At least that was my intention when I was writing this handful of words. Of course though --- I haven't a clue as to what I'm doing.
Dear Clueless
If most poets world wide did not have a clue as to what they were doing the way you don't, then there would be excellent emotionalization and expert penning going on world wide. Yeah, you have the virus and four more to meet a goal and pass it. I will read more of your work, my friend. I need easy writing for balance against the heavy stuff I tackle and don't know what I'm doing out there search, like you, for a clue - Just Bein' Stella
Thank you, Stella... All in
Thank you, Stella... All in all, I just imagine a moment in time and try to describe it with a handful of words.
Perhaps I'll just have a ball while eating lunch.