Opened Eyes

 

Opened Eyes

 

Breathless take of the rolling meadow,

showered in kisses from morning dew

surreality prompted by shining sun,

its beauty witnessed 'neath heaven's blue

 

Breezy wisps across season's tinctured shades,

creating spangled rainbows of shimmering light

vivid colors stretching past horizon's edge,

each flower's majestic bloom sparkling bright

 

Diminishing stars bringing paradise defined,

glimmer for night shared with breaking day

an  essence of Eden in all that's seen,

opening your eyes will lead the way

 

© C.E.Vance

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It may be short - but it says exactly what I want it to… This defines me. Just another handful of words.

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Stardust's picture

wonderfully penned!! not

wonderfully penned!! not really sure which one is more beautiful... ur words or the picture above, but they totally complement each other :)

best wishes :)

cevance's picture

Thank you for the very

Thank you for the very favorable comment.

bishu's picture

Feast for the eyes & mind my friend

Feast for the eyes & mind my friend


©bishu 

 

cevance's picture

Thank you, Bishu my friend.

Thank you, Bishu my friend.

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

beautiful as always :)

beautiful as always :)

cevance's picture

Thank you, Jessi my dear.

Thank you, Jessi my dear.

allets's picture

"...an essence of Eden in all that's seen..."

Each line read is inhaled and installed in the permanent place of the mind. Enjoyed, no experienced betimes and eternally - nice. Just bein' - Stella

 

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cevance's picture

Thank you.   And oft times

Thank you.

 

And oft times people wonder what I'm thinking - a handful of words helps describe it sometimes.