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WHEN WILL YOU BE BACK
Do you remember that day...
The night was extremely dark
The sky was filled with dark clouds
And was raining heavily.
We were on the road
Where no one else was there
Apart from the two of us,
You held my hand in yours.
I could feel the warmth then..
You looked straight into my eyes
And I looked into yours too,
My heart began to race....
It thumped happily against my chest,
Then you promised me never,
To leave my hand till the end.
I could feel the beauty of love then...
Because of the promise you made
I still live......
Every single breath I take
I breathe in your name.
Here I stand on the same road,
Where you swore that you'd be with me,
Till the very end.
Tell me,when will you be back......
Your poem is bright of the future expectations from you Dear CJJ
Your poem is bright of the future expectations from you Dear CJJ.May God bless you on your sweet poetic journey~From~a~very~distant~waster~of~time
©bishu
Thank you so much
Thank you for your beautiful words :)
beautiful poem with a sad
beautiful poem with a sad end..
the way you express your feelings in words, you can make reader's eyes wet by just little more effort
Hmm...
Ok next time I'll try my best to make you cry
awe... so sad. I really liked
awe... so sad. I really liked the read though. Afterall, I am on the road... ;)
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When will you be back:
What a sad poem, how dreadful to be forgotten and your love and devotion spurned. Probably better to find a new meaningful love. A lovely poem and a good read, also well written.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
Thank you
#Thank you...
A Quick Trip
To the store, or to visit mom, or some other errand. The lover is impatient - I chose the return as a guarantee - not sad, just the long wait - Lady A