Just Show Me What You Wrote About Me

your judgments deep
and your judgements wide
it's cut me (so) deep
but I've spent 3 seasons
swallowing my pride
it finds me in my sleep
it pours on my heart the insecurity
because of what it's worth to me
it drowns my head in insecurity
because you think so less of me
I thought that you and I
that we were free
but link by link
you wrapped these chains around me
why is who I am
something from you I have to hide, hide, hide
you're poisoning my pride
oh, you and I
I thought that we were free
but my bruised ego, you kicked in
has really got, the better of me
has really got the better of me
my fairy tale life style
it something I want to celebrate
but your demons
they swarm in
and just regurgitate
and they pour on the insecurity
all over everything that's pure in me
they pour on the insecurity
all over what I love about me

oh this purple rain, and it's acidity
is pouring down and washing me
eating me away, until there's nothing left
eating me away, until it takes my last breath
your judgment destroys just what I like about me
it takes away all of who I am and leaves me with your insecurity

The "J's" for Judgement
and I surely know
it's hooked me round itself
and I'm on tow
with how you think so less of me
your humbleness is better then me
so thanks a million from me
for passing on and injecting in
your insecurity

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Phantom_Of_A_Nightmare's picture

love it

i absolutely love it, i had a relationship like this and this describes what i felt.. Bravo


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pldappls's picture

i really like this. obviously

i really like this. obviously not the underlying sense of pain but more the subtle but still biting (and screaming 'fuck you') anger. great great great fucking piece dude.

allets's picture

link by link

you wrapped this love in a poem around me, unrequited, gone in 10 seconds - whew, what an affair! - intense - Lady A