Vise-versa

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I saw you at school today
Laughing and giggling like usual
Except when I looked at you
You looked away
Vise-versa
The same as yesterday

I saw you at the hospital today
In shock as you looked me up and down
you say,
"what did you do to yourself?"
I looked at you
You looked away
Vise-versa
The same as yesterday

I saw you at my grave today
this time you didn't hide your face
I saw you crying out your eyes
I looked at you
You finally looked my way
Vise-versa
The same as all the yesterdays

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drangel's picture

very traditional in thoughts and emotions

It reads like a classic traditional piece ...Amazing indeed!!


Dr S T Wali
Pediatrician/Pediatric HIV Specialist
New Delhi-110001

dare2dream's picture

amazing

This poem is ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!! I love it!!! You have real talent c:


-Bryson T. Staley