The Distance Between Us

Caressing dark shadows

Infused by another

I lie here in wait for the day

 

Blissful snow patterns

Engraved in the ashes

In memories I am enslaved

 

Why am I burdened

By lingering reflections

False pretense

In a maniacal composition

 

Screaming out my lungs

But no one can hear

Submerged in an ocean of fear

 

Stop

Breathe

I'm begging you please

Release me from this haunting reverie

Stop

No

I have lost all control

Clinging to sanity

At the edge of my soul

Don't let go

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deepinyourdreams's picture

yoyo

I like the words......needed some background music to give me some kind of frame for it..so I listened to Metallica, "Nothing else matters" while reading it though a few times.          The music doesn't exactly fit, but put me in a metal frame of mind for the words.           I think with the write music, could be a kool song....Bear


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Carcass's picture

Thank you

I hope it becomes a great song maybe one day it finishes! Thank you.

Carcass's picture

Thank you guys for reading!

Thank you guys for reading!

KindredSpirit's picture

Good one

KS

and_hera_met_zeus's picture

i like this!  very nice.

i like this!  very nice.