Dad Died

Dad Died



You said, “this conversation is over, and you with it.”

but it’s not. I continue to talk, to probe the possibilities

dialoguing        at times bridging the         gaps



attimesnot



You declared, “I’ll live life on my terms, no one else’s”

but you didn’t.  Life had other plans and whispered loud

over your protestations, to carry the day, with no contradiction



save one



You argued with death, and death bowed, briefly

you made your point   it came granting you a

certain dignity, unachieved, but granted posthumously



I saw



the man I wished you were, and hope to be



my presence as you died taken



your death a gift to me



and now I wear



your ring



What will I say?



Who will listen?



Will anyone be there with me?



As I was with you.



© Bart Breen 2005

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reflections on My father's death.  

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An infinity of experience

An infinity of experience capsulized in a few words.
Some of us believe that we choose our parents before we are born..
in order to pass certain tests.

Thank you for a deep, loving, moving poem.