Dust

Dry, stale air

Swirling in a sunbeam

Glittering lifelike

As if to catch me

As I sit all alone

In an empty room

On the bare wood floor

And listen for the silent knock

There's no one at the door

I feel the first layer of dust upon my soul

My fingers stick together

Like pages of mildew in a book

I can't read the lines of my palms

Drying and cracking

Crying and lacking

And still

As eight spider legs tickle my face

Laying the first strand of web across my soul

I blink my eye

As he anchors a strand on my lashes

He looks to see what moved

Has something in me moved?

Just dust in empty spaces

Cracked wood smiles on mildewed faces

And still

He looks to see what I am

Nothing

Like the empty room

Like the bare wood floor

Like the silent knocking

Of no one at the door

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Violet Carolina's picture

this one, my fav lines are near the beginning...dust stirring. one of my early childhood memories is sunlight streaming through a window and highlighting dust in the air. i was fascinated by it. v.

/jen/ Amberkytti's picture

i hear my voice in this.

/jen/ Amberkytti's picture

This was . .. just . . .right. Wonderful images and so well done. so well done.
jen

mwhatim's picture

very moving piece .......I so hate DUST! stay safe :o)

Teresa Jacobs's picture

Dear Donald, Hi! Great Poem. Very descriptive and soul searching. Just a great poem. I like your writing style. I will read more. BYE! Teresa

Deborah  Russell's picture

I love the haunting visuals in this...i think i might have mentioned that on another board...any way this is an excellent read! I do enjoy your work.

J M's picture

beautiful......of course ;-) definitely one of your better ones.

Kristine Snow's picture

What can I say? This is so sad. The thoughts surely come across. Sad thoughts, lonely thoughts. Great imagery.

Meena Chopra's picture

A very nice poem with powerful images.

Michelle Noel's picture

Wow...this poem captured me completely. Its really incredible. Just perfect.

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

I was absorbed by your poem "Dust." Very thought-provoking. Your usage of words is wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent.