Dry, stale air
Swirling in a sunbeam
Glittering lifelike
As if to catch me
As I sit all alone
In an empty room
On the bare wood floor
And listen for the silent knock
There's no one at the door
I feel the first layer of dust upon my soul
My fingers stick together
Like pages of mildew in a book
I can't read the lines of my palms
Drying and cracking
Crying and lacking
And still
As eight spider legs tickle my face
Laying the first strand of web across my soul
I blink my eye
As he anchors a strand on my lashes
He looks to see what moved
Has something in me moved?
Just dust in empty spaces
Cracked wood smiles on mildewed faces
And still
He looks to see what I am
Nothing
Like the empty room
Like the bare wood floor
Like the silent knocking
Of no one at the door
this one, my fav lines are near the beginning...dust stirring. one of my early childhood memories is sunlight streaming through a window and highlighting dust in the air. i was fascinated by it. v.
i hear my voice in this.
This was . .. just . . .right. Wonderful images and so well done. so well done.
jen
very moving piece .......I so hate DUST! stay safe :o)
Dear Donald, Hi! Great Poem. Very descriptive and soul searching. Just a great poem. I like your writing style. I will read more. BYE! Teresa
I love the haunting visuals in this...i think i might have mentioned that on another board...any way this is an excellent read! I do enjoy your work.
beautiful......of course ;-) definitely one of your better ones.
What can I say? This is so sad. The thoughts surely come across. Sad thoughts, lonely thoughts. Great imagery.
A very nice poem with powerful images.
Wow...this poem captured me completely. Its really incredible. Just perfect.
I was absorbed by your poem "Dust." Very thought-provoking. Your usage of words is wonderful. Thank you for sharing your talent.