Lost

I hate you Earth...

and the worthless life you gave me.



I hate you Time...

and the speed you go to pass me.



I hate you Heart...

and the lengths you'll go to break me.



I hate you mind...

because you left without me

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2000 - Poughkeepsie

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jsb87uk's picture

I loved this poem.
Exactly the way I feel xxx

Unknown Poet's picture

I love how you express your hatred to these things but give a logical and meaningful answer why. It made me want to hate these things too.

Brittany Betz's picture

That was cool. I like alot. I think it would've been better if you had just kept going. There was so much more to be said. but by keeping it short you showed what was important. Great job. congrats.

"Life's too short, don't waste time being unhappy."