diomante

          Newborn

     Eyes closed no hair

    Tired sleepy happy

    Baby girl kid boy

Laughing,crying,testing

         Eyes open

           Todler

Author's Notes/Comments: 

  i did this for an english project for school

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Your snippets of words create a vivid picture of a newborn baby- this is nice. I hope you got an A on the English class project. [2 "d"'s in "toddler," by the way.]

-David