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With this blade I'll make you go away

All your lies, you just can't stay

I scream and I shout but I just can't win

Depression overcomes me and I have to give in

It's upsetting to me that you don't care

It's upsetting to know that you were never there

One cut for the time that you turned me down

Now another for the times you were never around

I go deeper and deeper until I can't feel the pain

I'll go dizzy from all of the blood I will drain

To bleed you out would be the ultimate goal

To wake up from this nightmare and free my soul

With just one push of a button my life would come to an end

Ahh maybe next time...



LIFE IS TOO FUCKING SHORT TO END IT ALL! LET TIME TAKE IT'S TOLL AND GROW OLD! GET MARRIED, HAVE KIDS, WATCH THEM HAVE KIDS, JUST LIVE AND STOP TRYING TO RUN AWAY FROM YOUR PROBLEMS! CUTTING WON'T HELP YOU, SUICIDE IS THE CHEAP WAY OUT, FACE IT ALL AND BEAT THE SYSTEM BECAUSE THE SYSTEM IS JUST FUCKED! LET IT GO AND GET OVER IT!

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 4:21am
©1 June 2005 - 4:43am — briansullivan
16 June 2005 - 9:55pm — No One Important (not verified)
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i think that i can honestly say i adore this poem. it is really honest and good. i really agree with it, and that makes me sound like a hypocrite. but i dont do that shit anymore, good job me...Just Live maybe? i dont know, i am not good at nameing poems...

13 June 2005 - 3:40am — Devin (not verified)
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I can really relate to this poem.. Many times I think of cutting and like at the end realize how worthless it really is.. This just shows me that I am not in this world alone and that though sometimes I may feel alone the depression is always broken by something.. Congrats.. I have a feeling this poem took A LOT of effort...Keep it up!! and always stay true to yourself