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God...HA
With blood soaked wishes
The angels will cry
No matter what God
In the end you will die
So open your eyes
It's time for a revelation
Look within yourself
You are your own creation
With blood soaked wishes
The angels will cry
No matter what God
In the end you will die
So open your eyes
It's time for a revelation
Look within yourself
You are your own creation
I don't care what others may say... I really do respect you though you may be blunt you get your point across and seem to do so quite beautifully.. I love this poem because it states how I feel also.. I believe you make your own destiny.. Great Job!!
Love it, its short and to the point and very well written. Plus it reeks of controversy!
wow, someone has actually said it
dude what kind of poem is this? men you should be ashamed of your self, to put down someone who lost a son willing to die for you!thats stupid, men if it wasnt for god/jesus you and i wouldnt be here right now. and "you are your own creation" well your not your gods creation he knew you,knew how you looked,even knew what your name would be brian, before you were born. Have you ever gave your life to god? look i am really not that strong in religion ya know like god this and god that. but i do take puting down god pretty serious. you just dont go there hes your god your father. If he dosent fit in to your beleife fine, but at least respect him.
e-mail me i would like to talk about this more and get your opinon on what i just wrote.
always
sarah
brian man your shit rocks
really good, true, and gets the point across quickly. i agree. i really like all of your poems, they are all really good...