(Song) This Moment

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I see your eyes

And wipe away your tears

You are the only one I live for

But I can tell that you don't care

Here I stand

Hoping that you would come and hold me

I could scream

'Cause you won't

As you stand there

Watching my heart bleed



My heartbeat, it seems to skip once

At the thought of just your presence

And it seems this moment won't end

It won't go away



In this moment I saw my life

Start to break apart in front of my face

As you left me there alone

You don't know

How I had felt when you were gone

I was dead

Couldn't breathe

And I never

Never will again



My heartbeat, it seems to skip once

At the thought of just your presence

And it seems this moment won't end

It won't go away

It won't go away

It won't go a way

It won't go away



In this moment I saw my life

Start to break apart in front of my face

As you left me there alone



My heartbeat, it seems to skip once

At the thought of just your presence

And it seems this moment won't end

It won't go away



My heartbeat, it seems to skip once

At the thought of just your presence

And it seems this moment won't end

It won't go away



My heartbeat, it seems to skip once

At the thought of just your presence

And it seems this moment won't end

It won't go away

Won't go away

It won't go away

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Tania Z.'s picture

Hum, this song has me a little confused. I am not sure whether I like it or not. I think it would help if I could hear the music to it. On the other hand, it is well written, the hook is catchy enough. What I do like about it is that it seems soulful while at the same time being a real downer. What I don;t like about it is that it repeats its self to much. Your heartbroken and wanna die, okay we get it. Honestly, I feel like at the end of the song you got lazy and kept pressing the copy button. But I d like the way you start the song.

Jonathon Matthews's picture

Very interesting song. Hard for me to get the complete meaning but maybe music would help it. I don't know. All the same it was well written.