Silence Forgotten

With the Moon embroidered into my eyes

the stars may look at me

once I take this silence forgotten to the water.

From here, allow it to sail away.

What words I can say I don’t know

but the wind has a way to talk to me

and to the skies take me along for the ride.

To never exercise your heart with another human soul,

it’s extremely lonely, not taking one breath.

However the skies I fly enjoying the view.

No trace of solitude unleashed

nor tear shed to stricken the heart of mine

so the very core I feel light,

so that though I am friendless

it isn’t lonely anymore,

myself accompanied by a lost wind too.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I had a major loneliness pang today...so I thought I'd write something to ease it out.

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Melissa Gayles's picture

oh my goodness, this is very beautiful, yet saddening. i loved the last line; it really was an ending. :)

Alan Cheng's picture

Oh my goodness!! Really? You felt a major feeling of loneliness today?!! I did too!! For some reason, I've been getting some bad vibes!! More like negative vibes!! But the feeling of loneliness is towards my boyfriend. I think it's because his parents found out about us again, and decided to forbid him from talking to me and seeing me ever again. I sure hope that this isn't the case, but I've been getting some bad vibes about this for about 3 days now!!

Alan Cheng's picture

This written piece is really good!!

Sharon Wunsch's picture

When I was young I'd soothe my loneliness by going for long walks in the woods. My dogs, the towering trees, and all living things around me were my companions. The wind, water, and sun were a comfort too. I relate to your feelings in this poem.