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Pin Needles In My Eyes (Traditional Haiku)
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Darkness (When I Die Inside) Excruciating
I cannot blink for I bleed
Red globules of tears
Excruciating
I cannot blink for I bleed
Red globules of tears
Painful, but in an emotional sense as well as a physical one. It also gave really vivid haunting imagery.
Great piece and thanks for your latest comment, i'm glad you enjoyed the poem...the lines you mentioned were also my favourites.
Lauren x
Totally disgusting piece. I didn't like the images you provided me with, but I don't think most people would want to have this particular vision in their head either. You seem to be a foul mood in your writes today. Snap out of it. I like you happy go lucky. :o)