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Stones crushed underfoot

A wind howling to the clouds

I'm completely soaked.

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Traditional haiku.  This happened to me yesterday...

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:57am
©15 December 2006 - 8:52pm — bluewave
29 January 2007 - 7:36am — Bryan Adam Tomimbang (not verified)
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Yup... - Kevin (me)

25 March 2007 - 9:58pm — Shaketa Copelin (not verified)
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beautiful description. It could be taken both figutively and/or litterally.