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Irritated, throat and head aching

My nose a pain in the ass

Fraught with endless goopiness.

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Modern haiku.  I'm sick after X-mas 2006, I have the right to be grumpy.

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:56am
©27 December 2006 - 1:05am — bluewave
29 January 2007 - 7:33am — Bryan Adam Tomimbang (not verified)
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Yup, I remember this one... - Bryan (me)

1 March 2008 - 12:01am — jonfeb
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I thought Haiku was meant to be 5-7-5. I've heard of some variations of this... but to my mind, coupled with the fact that it already doesn't have to rhyme; what happens when you remove the 'syllable count' as well?