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Ensnared by Nature's trap,

an artful yet unexpected happening

I'm sinking at turtle's pace.

When, then, can I do

beneath a dismal Sun?

Not a soul at sight

or breath of life.

But as long as my heart pulsates

I will get out of this because

"Where there's a will, there's a way!"

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(Prose) / I'm facing a lot of problems right now, sticky problems, but that doesn't stop me from confronting them...

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 3:56am
©28 January 2007 - 4:42pm — bluewave
29 January 2007 - 7:50am — Alan Cheng (not verified)
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Hi!! I really like this poem, and I really think that it's totally awesome!! As I read this poem, I felt somewhat the same of how you felt, or possibly how you're feeling right now as you're facing problems in your life. I've been facing some problems myself, but just remember, writing it out is the best way to express your emotions from deep within. =)

28 January 2007 - 6:53pm — Ruth Lovejoy (not verified)
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I absolutely love this. It says it all. Like you I have many problems ahead of me I've gotten a few answers on but are not yet resolved and like you I'm not a quitter even if I break down into tears now and then..Excellent write!