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Your boat, it floats away.

Boys up from beachtowels

nakedandscreaming

into the icy-ocean after it.



Indifferent, the girls

run fingers through sand;

feel nature’s sunburnt-kiss.

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Sandeep .'s picture

Though i've never been into this situation you mentioned,
i still can imagine it....It must be Fun,right:-)

Hey,and thanx for your encouragements on my poems....You asked about style...I dont usually try a style,It just comes natural...may be it can have a semblance to some forms....which i may have read or gone thro'...still it remains irrevocably mine:-)
And as i don't stick to a pattern of writing...there is a possibilty of anything:-)

Thanx again.

Good-day.